Your mission this weekend is to get all 3 body paragraphs to a place where you feel like they are excellent and meet/exceed the requirements.
Using my feedback and if you got peer feedback that feedback, make sure you have used the checklist we had for the body paragraphs.
Review the Writing in History Shouldn't Be a Mystery booklet for the SS Do's/Don'ts, for a list of transition words, and for help with using evidence.
DUE MONDAY 11/7
